Someone’s story

Someone’s story

I watched as a flood of depression washed in.

The rain of emotions still falling, your dam walls too thin.

The cracks showing the extent of your pain.

Massive dept, had you building on the unstable  flood plain.

Setting yourself up for destruction.

Discarding real friends and surrounding yourself with masters of manipulation.

I saw your fake smile and your real frown in a puddle reflection.

You didn’t notice me see the sadness in your eyes and make the connection.

The same old me is only a call away, im here for a mate.

My fear is that your pride won’t let you, a padlocked, guarded gate.

 © Deon Heemskerk 30-1-2012

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4 responses

  1. Very moving this one Deon 🙂

    January 31, 2012 at 10:17 pm

    • deebendygarden

      Thanks Anne, its always a bit of a gamble on how people will react to a darker poem.

      February 1, 2012 at 8:41 am

  2. I look forward to reading your poems!

    January 31, 2012 at 10:18 pm

    • deebendygarden

      The poem posts have overtaken the garden posts. It might be time for me to do some work in the garden!!

      February 1, 2012 at 8:42 am

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